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looking for a kiss
a piece of barren land
flying yellow butterflies
laughing a blue piece of sky...
flying yellow butterflies
laughing a blue piece of sky...
Published 2nd Aug 2023
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2nd Aug 2023 7:13am
Dear D,
Lovely write. Full of great imagery and opposition between the barren land and then the butterflies and blue sky. I really enjoyed this piece. H🌷
Lovely write. Full of great imagery and opposition between the barren land and then the butterflies and blue sky. I really enjoyed this piece. H🌷
2nd Aug 2023 7:35am
2nd Aug 2023 1:34pm
Beautiful, dimpy.
You write with such passion, I love it. Keep writing, poetess. You make the world a better place with your thoughts.
You write with such passion, I love it. Keep writing, poetess. You make the world a better place with your thoughts.
2nd Aug 2023 3:10pm
Thank you for saying such beautiful words for me. I'm glad that you liked my words! ❤
2nd Aug 2023 11:36pm
3rd Aug 2023 3:48am
To me the blue sky is howling your name and telling me that you're beautiful. Keep on writing.
3rd Aug 2023 10:33am
3rd Aug 2023 9:04pm
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