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loves lost rondeau
Come autumns chill we lost loves gilt
so short the flash of spring times thrill
our stars were never quite aligned
our passion was so unsublime
All greenness gone no chlorophyll
each kiss that only spells peril
those golden times not worth a dime
come autumns chill
A pairing that was unfulfilled
the Ides of march, had there will
time for us was so unkind
fated to write an ode in rhyme
comes now a rondeau from my quill
come autumns chill
so short the flash of spring times thrill
our stars were never quite aligned
our passion was so unsublime
All greenness gone no chlorophyll
each kiss that only spells peril
those golden times not worth a dime
come autumns chill
A pairing that was unfulfilled
the Ides of march, had there will
time for us was so unkind
fated to write an ode in rhyme
comes now a rondeau from my quill
come autumns chill
Published 20th Jul 2023
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20th Jul 2023 9:21pm
It's a wonderful offering, slip. I know you've requested honest critique, but I feel now is not the time.
Nice to see you back, my friend.
Nice to see you back, my friend.
21st Jul 2023 3:12am
You support and mentoring I have never failed to appreciate, hoping you are well and your business is flourishing Ps that was my first rondeau expecting a Punctuation caning! XO slip
21st Jul 2023 12:24pm
21st Jul 2023 7:46pm
thank you Cipher writing in these strict forms, with strict syllable count per line and still retaining a poetic thread is a challenge, I am glad you enjoyed it
