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Mind If I Join You For A Soak?
Bonnie was soaking
in the jacuzzi before
she discovered that
Steve was staring at Bonnie
with such an enormous smile.
in the jacuzzi before
she discovered that
Steve was staring at Bonnie
with such an enormous smile.
Published 19th Jul 2023
Author's Note
The title of this tanka poem happens to be what one person says after seeing another enjoying a relaxing soak in the hot tub.
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20th Jul 2023 6:20am
Title prompted this rhyme in my mind (not intended to match the poem's style):
"Mind if I join you for a soak?"
She turned, and saw the strapping bloke
from whose direction question came.
Her eyes took in his six-foot frame....
"Mind if I join you for a soak?"
She turned, and saw the strapping bloke
from whose direction question came.
Her eyes took in his six-foot frame....
20th Jul 2023 12:37pm
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