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A Drifting Innuendo
the
moods
didn't exactly
swing this morn
they kinda
drifted through
the pores
of this
artiste
while wafting
across the
shores of
the imagination
a splendid menu
indeed
as she chaperoned me
thru the spread
of her venue
i inhaled
every secret
collected her
in primary hues
of emotions
channeled
her steamy essence
between the tocks
an obsidian
canvas
as a teasing
mistress
a seductive
mist
mystifying
man
churning
with inner vision
zeroed in
on the movement
of a specific
element within
as her
plume hints
softly
at embers
seething
beneath
the epoch of
us
Published 18th Jul 2023
| Edited 20th Jul 2023
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18th Jul 2023 3:49am
I very much appreciate the metaphoric imagery of artistry that inspires such impactful resonance. The absolutely pleasurable way in which your writing uses various hints of color and the essence an underlying desirous burn, makes for a tremendously captivating read; like a painting, I can revisit over and over, finding something new and exciting each and every time....and what a beautiful experience that is ..
Thank you for sharing with us, Naj
🌹💙 - B
Thank you for sharing with us, Naj
🌹💙 - B
18th Jul 2023 3:47pm
Naaj, you hit this out of the park. Blue noted the way you used color to create a sensual matrix of images. I really appreciated that. You did an incredible job luring me in to the one held-breath moment of connection. It was a slow burn and really great work.
8th Aug 2023 6:12pm
A drifting Innuendo...
it came through me
and my pores opened...
as I inhaled.
Needing to be filled.
Every secret.
A splendid bleed.
Spreading wide.
Opening...
In primary hues.
Emotions overflowing.
My steamy essence.
A canvas in need.
Teasing.
Seductive.
Churning his excitement.
A specific element.
Swirled around.
Tightly embracing.
His pulsating desire.
Needing to fill me.
So deep.
Bursting the seams.
it came through me
and my pores opened...
as I inhaled.
Needing to be filled.
Every secret.
A splendid bleed.
Spreading wide.
Opening...
In primary hues.
Emotions overflowing.
My steamy essence.
A canvas in need.
Teasing.
Seductive.
Churning his excitement.
A specific element.
Swirled around.
Tightly embracing.
His pulsating desire.
Needing to fill me.
So deep.
Bursting the seams.
8th Aug 2023 8:47pm
This comment is....very extravagant and intuitive...
It works for me
And fits sublimely within my intent
Damn...
And thank you
It works for me
And fits sublimely within my intent
Damn...
And thank you
8th Aug 2023 8:59pm
Extravagant and intuitive... I like that a lot!
And I am so glad it works for you...
Since your words definitely 'work' for me. ;)
Capturing your intent feels so good.
And I really love 'Damn' lol That makes me feel it even more...
And thank you too. ;)
And I am so glad it works for you...
Since your words definitely 'work' for me. ;)
Capturing your intent feels so good.
And I really love 'Damn' lol That makes me feel it even more...
And thank you too. ;)
