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bitter sun
like a pill to large
to swallow
or pain to great
to endure
your face, memory,
scent
leaves my mind and
crawls down to my
hand
slips from
my finger
tips
and falls to the
floor
hardly
noticed
barely
missed
Published 14th Jul 2023
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14th Jul 2023 7:12pm
14th Jul 2023 9:14pm
14th Jul 2023 9:14pm
Fuck yes! Bitter indeed, but the opposite of love isn't hate.
It's indifference.
That apathy is the good shit. Lap it up.
Great write.
It's indifference.
That apathy is the good shit. Lap it up.
Great write.
15th Jul 2023 1:22am
Yes. The best hate is indifference ( at least to me).
Thank you, Betty. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Betty. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
19th Aug 2023 3:39pm
20th Aug 2023 3:12pm
