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Hole Volcanic Deep Plugged --
Full Spewing Each Flatulent Eruption
"On being tossed into sacred Mt. Fujiyama, most beautiful Japanese virgin spirits crapped their kimonos."
-- an ancient Japanese ghost story
once told on campouts at each witching time of night
round the dark charcoals in the hibachi
*
My naked spirit chilly sans kimono its hibachi lit
when on my soul Mt. Fujiyama hurled and hiccupped hot ash shit.
*
a dedication of Respect
for
the burning Pain of erupting spiritual hemorrhoids
either internal or external --
ancient japanese piles or otherwise
a revolving helios couplet menippean satire on
the multitudes of ethereal no things
(as well as the plagues of weeny things soulful)
july, 2023 -- film star winona ryder tragically too old these days to be cast
the beautiful american pregnant virgin spirit cast
into fictional mt. helena bonham carter
*
feetnote
Contest: Spiritual
Prompt: Using the words "kimono," "Fujiyama," and "hibachi," write a spiritual, dark poem of no more than fifty words.
Sponsor: adagio
Form: Couplet in Iambic Octameter
Literary Devices: Irony, Personification, Assonance, Alliteration, Inversion, Rhyme, Pun,
and Brevity: The "Soul" of Wit (oh -- and Figurative Language to boot)
Theme: The Emotional Brain in the Dark, Its Neural Lights Being Off
Poem's Word Count: 21 -- the number representing a strong connection between the physical world of Reality and the "spiritual" realm of fantasy
"On being tossed into sacred Mt. Fujiyama, most beautiful Japanese virgin spirits crapped their kimonos."
-- an ancient Japanese ghost story
once told on campouts at each witching time of night
round the dark charcoals in the hibachi
*
My naked spirit chilly sans kimono its hibachi lit
when on my soul Mt. Fujiyama hurled and hiccupped hot ash shit.
*
a dedication of Respect
for
the burning Pain of erupting spiritual hemorrhoids
either internal or external --
ancient japanese piles or otherwise
a revolving helios couplet menippean satire on
the multitudes of ethereal no things
(as well as the plagues of weeny things soulful)
july, 2023 -- film star winona ryder tragically too old these days to be cast
the beautiful american pregnant virgin spirit cast
into fictional mt. helena bonham carter
*
feetnote
Contest: Spiritual
Prompt: Using the words "kimono," "Fujiyama," and "hibachi," write a spiritual, dark poem of no more than fifty words.
Sponsor: adagio
Form: Couplet in Iambic Octameter
Literary Devices: Irony, Personification, Assonance, Alliteration, Inversion, Rhyme, Pun,
and Brevity: The "Soul" of Wit (oh -- and Figurative Language to boot)
Theme: The Emotional Brain in the Dark, Its Neural Lights Being Off
Poem's Word Count: 21 -- the number representing a strong connection between the physical world of Reality and the "spiritual" realm of fantasy
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