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Too Far for Leaping.

A one way street to thoughts I think  
they flash away through bone of skull,  
and faster than quick eye's can blink  
the Einstein smarts or mine, beer dulled.  
Some think thoughts onto ocean gulls  
to wave them on across great seas,  
fair visions of romance for sure  
but I wing thought for deeper needs.  
 
' A massless particle I need, ' I ink,  
thinking, a neuron's neutrino, mass null,  
and tachyons, massless, a slim link  
to ruminate round thought sift and cull,  
as photons spark in mind, I mull  
god less thoughts of tachyon's great speeds  
will wing thought through the stoutest doors  
and from my naivety, great hope breeds...  
 
My weightless thought to massless shrink  
as they flash through bone of skull,  
slight diaphanous thoughts I've thinked  
streak on their way to my Mum.  
Down four, three, two, one dimensions, strings thrummed,  
and on these thoughts till replete I'll feed,  
that long before I go through that same door  
my distant Mum and me will greet.
Written by Rew
Published | Edited 11th Jul 2023
Author's Note
A neuron's neutrino. Neurons are well known mine/these are formed from neutrinos
Tachyons postulated but not found yet.
" god less thoughts " ie without religious afterlife stuff.
Wave, points, strings, dimensions. See particle theory
and sci-fi. Mass & Weight are different.

Every word Tasted & Weighed, Stroked and believed in.
including ' thinked. '

This title is part of a Housman poem.
This is one of my most imaginative pieces. Shame really, to be so lost?
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