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Re. You don't complete me.
6th Jul 2023 2:58am
No one can really complete another person. Believing that just allows someone to avoid dealing w/ what they think is missing within their being
You say, " as if I was whole." Perhaps it is better to say, " I AM whole!"
Interesting, excellent write, k. Very existential.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
You say, " as if I was whole." Perhaps it is better to say, " I AM whole!"
Interesting, excellent write, k. Very existential.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. You don't complete me.
6th Jul 2023 11:38am
Thanks, bk! You hit the nail on the head. I like leaving it open for the reader to think/feel their way to the next step... which you did. Wholeness is a realization I think people have to get to on their own.
Many thanks for the RL.
❤️k
Many thanks for the RL.
❤️k
Re. You don't complete me.
7th Jul 2023 00:19am
Re: Re. You don't complete me.
7th Jul 2023 3:24pm
Oh, I fall in love regularly!! People are awesome. (Except the ones who suck, I don't fall in love with those...)
Thank you for stopping by, I appreciate it.
😊k
Thank you for stopping by, I appreciate it.
😊k
Re. You don't complete me.
7th Jul 2023 11:04am
Not a fan of Jerry Mcguire, K.?.
:ppp
:)))
Nice showcase of clarity...
(Makes me think...)
:ppp
:)))
Nice showcase of clarity...
(Makes me think...)
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Re: Re. You don't complete me.
7th Jul 2023 3:25pm
Haha, it's a sweet movie scene... but has its limits.
I'm happy to make you think. Thinking is important.
❤k
I'm happy to make you think. Thinking is important.
❤k
Re. You don't complete me.
7th Jul 2023 12:11pm
Beautiful poem! I love how it celebrates self-acceptance and the power of being seen as whole.
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Re: Re. You don't complete me.
7th Jul 2023 3:26pm
Thank you! It is a very powerful thing - even powerful enough to make us eventually believe it.
😎k
😎k
Re: Re. You don't complete me.
8th Jul 2023 5:55pm
Re. You don't complete me.
BT,
I take great delight in your terse verse.
15 words of thought provoking flair that uniquely sparks an emotional reaction.
Well I firmly believe that no other individual can complete another in a sense
that the real answers to becoming whole can only lie within ourselves.
It is our very own emotional connections or feelings of love and desire that we feel for another individual,
that is what completes us and not the individual alone....
and Poof!!! my head explodes fused by your thought-provoking submission, lol
Hmmm the real question is how many times in our lifetime do we have to throw all of our pieces of the complicated puzzle of our lives back in the box just to get to that final piece of the puzzle in hopes to once again feel completed????, lol.
You are the Best BT !
I take great delight in your terse verse.
15 words of thought provoking flair that uniquely sparks an emotional reaction.
Well I firmly believe that no other individual can complete another in a sense
that the real answers to becoming whole can only lie within ourselves.
It is our very own emotional connections or feelings of love and desire that we feel for another individual,
that is what completes us and not the individual alone....
and Poof!!! my head explodes fused by your thought-provoking submission, lol
Hmmm the real question is how many times in our lifetime do we have to throw all of our pieces of the complicated puzzle of our lives back in the box just to get to that final piece of the puzzle in hopes to once again feel completed????, lol.
You are the Best BT !
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Re: Re. You don't complete me.
10th Jul 2023 10:51pm
Feet!!!!! You're back! Yay!
Insightful commentary on my brief thought.... I like the puzzle piece image. I think maybe different people help us complete different parts of our personal puzzle...?
Thanks for stopping by, I hope you can stay a while.
😁k
Insightful commentary on my brief thought.... I like the puzzle piece image. I think maybe different people help us complete different parts of our personal puzzle...?
Thanks for stopping by, I hope you can stay a while.
😁k
Re. You don't complete me.
14th Jul 2023 9:57pm
Some people can see more than what's on the surface. Perception goes beyond the five senses.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
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Re: Re. You don't complete me.
15th Jul 2023 2:07am
Re. You don't complete me.
7th Aug 2023 3:12pm
To be accepted even with all our quirks and strangeness... :p
What a wonderful feeling...
Even though no one can actually complete us, only we can do that...
It's nice when someone can see what brought us to this point.
All of the pain, happiness, love, admiration, inspiration... Possibilities...
Well maybe not all of it, some things should stay buried.
But you know what I mean. I love the thought of being whole.
And being seen that way... Beautiful writing BT.
What a wonderful feeling...
Even though no one can actually complete us, only we can do that...
It's nice when someone can see what brought us to this point.
All of the pain, happiness, love, admiration, inspiration... Possibilities...
Well maybe not all of it, some things should stay buried.
But you know what I mean. I love the thought of being whole.
And being seen that way... Beautiful writing BT.
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7th Aug 2023 6:13pm
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Re: Re. You don't complete me.
8th Aug 2023 2:14am
Oh yeah, looks like I forgot the minimalist tag!
I'm glad it gave you so many thoughts, and that you stopped in to share them. It's my opinion that we are all already whole, whether we feel that way or not. That doesn't mean we've discovered everything about ourselves yet - but we're not lacking anything. We are who we are, period. It's nice when we find someone who helps us recognize our own inherent completeness. Without flinching. Sometimes there are icky bits in the mix...
I'm awfully glad you don't hate me! 😆🐒🍌
Thanks for stopping in to chat. 😊
❤️k
I'm glad it gave you so many thoughts, and that you stopped in to share them. It's my opinion that we are all already whole, whether we feel that way or not. That doesn't mean we've discovered everything about ourselves yet - but we're not lacking anything. We are who we are, period. It's nice when we find someone who helps us recognize our own inherent completeness. Without flinching. Sometimes there are icky bits in the mix...
I'm awfully glad you don't hate me! 😆🐒🍌
Thanks for stopping in to chat. 😊
❤️k