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Fallen Heart
Nothing.
Just nothing.
I think but...
I really don't think I'm thinking.
Jumbled emotions.
Trying to sort things out.
Where are you?
because I can't find you.
Laughs,
Fun
and Jokes.
Yet nothing but tears are coming out.
I'm dying and you don't know it.
I'm dying and it's way too late now.
Just nothing.
I think but...
I really don't think I'm thinking.
Jumbled emotions.
Trying to sort things out.
Where are you?
because I can't find you.
Laughs,
Fun
and Jokes.
Yet nothing but tears are coming out.
I'm dying and you don't know it.
I'm dying and it's way too late now.
Published 17th Apr 2012
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18th Apr 2012 3:28am
4th Oct 2012 11:40pm
I know that feeling, a bit too recently in fact. You should keep expanding off of this. Its really interesting, and really heartfelt. Try to work on the transition between the 11th and 12th line. It feels a bit sudden.
