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Yesterday
Today
I'm still living in your arms
Nesting on you lap
Lust
No
Not lust
Need
Hurting
Leaking
I start to shake
As you take your time
Putting on that condom
A punishment
For making you wear one
But it was worth the wait
For the explosion didn't stop
On top of you
I thought
That was it
But behind
Climbed another
And another
Finally
With you filling me
Head fuzzy
I came
Almost infinitely
Had I not pushed off
I'd have fallen.
I'm still living in your arms
Nesting on you lap
Lust
No
Not lust
Need
Hurting
Leaking
I start to shake
As you take your time
Putting on that condom
A punishment
For making you wear one
But it was worth the wait
For the explosion didn't stop
On top of you
I thought
That was it
But behind
Climbed another
And another
Finally
With you filling me
Head fuzzy
I came
Almost infinitely
Had I not pushed off
I'd have fallen.
Published 29th Jun 2023
Author's Note
Hah the letters have paid off and damn it was embarrassing to let him see me lose it like that, but to be fair, I did t have to do much to let him go too! I was worried, going first, it's never happened and I irrationally thought he wouldn't come hahaha. Apparently 'floor muscles' ensure that when a chick comes, they don't have to move much, Mrs. Pacman does all the work lmao sorry to refer to it as such, personal joke.
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29th Jun 2023 8:07pm
29th Jun 2023 8:09pm
29th Jun 2023 8:32pm
29th Jun 2023 9:48pm
Both had a great night of multiple orgasm to remember, it seems to read to me: love particularly these lines:
I start to shake
As you take your time
Putting on that condom
A punishment
For making you wear one
But it was worth the wait
For the explosion didn't stop
On top of you
I thought
That was it
But behind
Climbed another
And another
Finally......
I came
Almost infinitely
I start to shake
As you take your time
Putting on that condom
A punishment
For making you wear one
But it was worth the wait
For the explosion didn't stop
On top of you
I thought
That was it
But behind
Climbed another
And another
Finally......
I came
Almost infinitely
29th Jun 2023 9:58pm
29th Jun 2023 10:03pm
Daaaayum.
Absolutely stellar accomplishment, imo!! High five lady! 🤚🏻
Loved this whole piece from beginning to end. Keep that truth infused so wonderfully into your ink, flowing... I know I sound like a broken record, but it's true— it's so refreshing.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹B
Absolutely stellar accomplishment, imo!! High five lady! 🤚🏻
Loved this whole piece from beginning to end. Keep that truth infused so wonderfully into your ink, flowing... I know I sound like a broken record, but it's true— it's so refreshing.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹B
29th Jun 2023 10:08pm
Haha I think you enjoy my current exploits as much as I do, Ms. Blue. I shall keep posting my experiences as raw as I can ;)
10th Jul 2023 3:23pm
Totally erotic write. If you enjoyed the experience you might look into Kegel exercises. Important for urinary tract health (especially after having children) but with the added bonus of you having better, purposeful control of “Mrs. Pac-Man “ your lover would probably approve given your note. Don’t be embarrassed about getting there first-seeing a lover loosing their mind is generally a pretty big turn-on for a lot of people (what is your experience when you’re lover “looses it”?)
10th Jul 2023 7:44pm
No! No kegels. I already have a small um.. and it's super tight, wouldn't that make it worse? I didn't know you can literally push someone out of you when you're... Arriving. It was my first time like that. I think some practice will prove vital. I'll look into kegals, but idk man
