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Dreams Hurt
Hurt,
Hurt,
Hurting...
Extremely
hurt right presently.
Exfremely hurt,
Can't you see...??
You don't know,
the pain
you keep putting
me through.
Toxic words
like needles gouging
out my eyes.
And you
don't even care,
I swear.
What does one
do, when someone
is just through?
A person's
true colors begin
to show, it's
true.
Oh whoah.
But the girl
inside, cries out
wishing she
could just let
go. The
pain she could
no longer
deny.
All she
ever wanted, is
a shoulder
to cry upon.
Now her
optimist self, seems
long
gone.
Hurt,
Hurting...
Extremely
hurt right presently.
Exfremely hurt,
Can't you see...??
You don't know,
the pain
you keep putting
me through.
Toxic words
like needles gouging
out my eyes.
And you
don't even care,
I swear.
What does one
do, when someone
is just through?
A person's
true colors begin
to show, it's
true.
Oh whoah.
But the girl
inside, cries out
wishing she
could just let
go. The
pain she could
no longer
deny.
All she
ever wanted, is
a shoulder
to cry upon.
Now her
optimist self, seems
long
gone.
Published 28th Jun 2023
Author's Note
Really nervous about this write. Another one stemming from pain and grief. Sometimes, the only way to work through all the painful emotions and feelings, is to put it down on paper. Enjoy💜
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6th Jul 2023 10:05pm
Indeed. Writing it out is cleansing.
The pain in your piece is soulfully yearning. I definitely felt what you aimed to convey.
Well done.
The pain in your piece is soulfully yearning. I definitely felt what you aimed to convey.
Well done.
7th Jul 2023 11:02pm
