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Vendetta
I wanted revenge
I wish I didn't want it so much
break him into pieces
destroy him completely
revenge and nothing else
tear him up like paper
a stupid message
forgotten in any corner
a secret desire to chew him
and never ever swallow
just chew him for a lifetime
be able to spit on him
and wait for him to drown
slowly into liquid hate.
PAR
Published 20th Jun 2023
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Anonymous
21st Jun 2023 10:16pm
hello there
you did a good job with this one
you conveyed your wanting of revenge powerfully
you did a good job with this one
you conveyed your wanting of revenge powerfully
21st Jun 2023 10:40pm
Thank you. One of my poetic goals is saying all with the less words I can so I agree with you that one went very well. 🐞🌻
1st Jul 2023 3:45am
This is really good. The energy is not so much negative as it is empowering. I can literally see you stabbing a pen onto paper, with vigor and emotion.
Well written, PAR. I love it.
Well written, PAR. I love it.
1st Jul 2023 8:38am
20th Jan 2024 00:23am
I could feel the anger. Not just read and comprehend it but actually feel it. Actually see him drowning in the spit of hate. Maybe because I have felt this way a time or many. It definitely paints a vivid picture.
20th Jan 2024 9:39am
