Dispersed

Love this.

Big smile. Thank you.

i can enjoy the images this provides delia

Thank you so much

“Pressed against your chest I feel the familiar thump of forever”
I’m in love with this line.
And this poem.
Write on, dear poetess.

I love when I can make someone feel good.  

I feel like the life position I'm in, now is the time to write, to push myself to unknown limits.  

I think our hearts think alike 😊

I agree.
Have yourself a great day Debbie.
It’s a perfect day for a perfect day.

This seems to be a strong point in your impassioned desire and pursuit of craftsmanship with the pen.  It is pretty erotic and intimate.  I really like how the comparisons and analogies you draw come straight from the heart, or longing to be in love.  Pretty graphic and descriptive, and the whole purpose of "what" and "why" is a stronghold of your expression here.  Anyway, hope this helps.

Hi again! You read me very well. I've always worn my heart on my sleeve. And I do long to fall in love. Right now I only have imagination and memories to draw upon.  
Your feedback means the world to me. 💜

I'm super impressed with your understanding of the mechanics of poetry, and your delivery of feedback is so descriptive. I know what I feel when I read another's poem, I wish I could express my opinion so eloquently. I think I fear interpreting something way different than what was meant by the words, lol. But that is the beauty of poetry, each person may take away something different.

This poem has the feel of that song by The Corrs, called 'Breathless' about temptation & taking that opportunity to unite. 😊

Hey there! That's a really cool compliment.

I love when you stop bye 😊

Okay, Bye! 👋 Lol. No worries. I enjoy stopping by. 🤣