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Tufted-Crow Toes
Flowers for dying, tufted-crow toes
as eyes weep shallow, pallid tallow
embracing requiem of death's despair
as eyesight begins to fail in swimming
with cuttlefish losing touch with reality
as eyes weep shallow, pallid tallow
dancing with the dark's bacteria
as eyes weep shallow, pallid tallow
embracing requiem of death's despair
as eyesight begins to fail in swimming
with cuttlefish losing touch with reality
as eyes weep shallow, pallid tallow
dancing with the dark's bacteria
Published 16th Jun 2023
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16th Jun 2023 12:06pm
I like the last line - dark's bacteria. Very creative way of dreaming up the dark.
16th Jun 2023 12:08pm
18th Jun 2023 8:45am
Dark's bacteria...
Real cool...
I have recently been encountering crows...
I jotted a note...
This was...
Yesterday, I think...
I was thinking about how
I would approach the subject matter...
It is interesting to see
how you explored the symbolism of the crow...
You enfolded the symbolism
into the darkness of time and space...
Which itself became an inversion
of itself...
Awakening into a twilight of ink sculptures...
Real cool...
I have recently been encountering crows...
I jotted a note...
This was...
Yesterday, I think...
I was thinking about how
I would approach the subject matter...
It is interesting to see
how you explored the symbolism of the crow...
You enfolded the symbolism
into the darkness of time and space...
Which itself became an inversion
of itself...
Awakening into a twilight of ink sculptures...
18th Jun 2023 2:23pm
Words are interesting, depending on how you use and space them. I have never let a word stand in the way of my imagination.
