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The Heavenly NeedLe...
A heartwrenching and
satanic violation to your body!
An evil intruder on an endless mission
of misery destruction and death!
Powerful and dominating
it strips you of yourself,
Burying your spirit...
and stealing your soul.
"Get me a spoon...... any cotton?
"Here hold this for me and pull it tight...
Tight damn it!"
Ssssss... Oooooohhh... Fuck yeah!
A demonic penetration
feeds the ultimate relaxation!
Shh! You hear that?
"They're coming!"
Oh you lost and disturbed child of darkness
they already came!
And here you sit,
disturbingly comfortable...
Caged in self imprisonment.
Another scar,
another search for the next fix.
The rest can wait.
Was that the baby?
satanic violation to your body!
An evil intruder on an endless mission
of misery destruction and death!
Powerful and dominating
it strips you of yourself,
Burying your spirit...
and stealing your soul.
"Get me a spoon...... any cotton?
"Here hold this for me and pull it tight...
Tight damn it!"
Ssssss... Oooooohhh... Fuck yeah!
A demonic penetration
feeds the ultimate relaxation!
Shh! You hear that?
"They're coming!"
Oh you lost and disturbed child of darkness
they already came!
And here you sit,
disturbingly comfortable...
Caged in self imprisonment.
Another scar,
another search for the next fix.
The rest can wait.
Was that the baby?
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Anonymous
17th Apr 2012 2:02am
the reality of addiction
not too gloomy
realistic
explains addiction beautifully
not too gloomy
realistic
explains addiction beautifully

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haha
17th Apr 2012 5:01am
I fucking loved this poem
Favourite part " the rest can wait.was that the baby"
Haha lmfo
Favourite part " the rest can wait.was that the baby"
Haha lmfo
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re: haha
17th Apr 2012 6:36pm
Well thanks..lol. i never had anyone amuzed by the part usually the complete opposite.. cool...
You know that...
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17th Apr 2012 11:13am
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=).
17th Apr 2012 6:37pm
this rocks!!!
17th Apr 2012 8:11pm
this poem rocks having struggled with the needle myself I could really relate to this honest masterfully written poem..peace Crim
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re: this rocks!!!
17th Apr 2012 8:13pm
=).. Yes it is the root of heavenly hell.. thank you so much for your comment..
agree
18th Apr 2012 4:34pm
I never did shot herion but I did meth and I believe you said it perfectly, esp Mr. Brownstone said it right the mixture of blood and water is the sexist sight on the planet, being able to draw back and see it in the vial knowing that you were successful in hitting your vain and soon you will become highhhhhhhhhhhhhh......
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re: agree
18th Apr 2012 6:23pm
Watching my mother do it all my life I could almost feel the rush.. yes.. a sin to die for and live for as well.. thank you miss as always.
Its an assault . . .
18th Apr 2012 10:26pm
on the safety and security of passivity.
I have to admit - I've never been there,
but this begins to provide an idea.
Well done
I have to admit - I've never been there,
but this begins to provide an idea.
Well done
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