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The first kiss
The first time that you kissed me
Down under the moon
Ide been sucking on lifes lemons
This moment couldn't come to soon
You're lips they tasted like heaven
Suddenly my heart went boom
That first time that you kissed me
I was over the moon
I still feel the same way
You still make my flowers bloom
Down under the moon
Ide been sucking on lifes lemons
This moment couldn't come to soon
You're lips they tasted like heaven
Suddenly my heart went boom
That first time that you kissed me
I was over the moon
I still feel the same way
You still make my flowers bloom
Published 14th Jun 2023
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Dear C,
This is such a charming poem. I really enjoyed the loving gratitude in the recalling of the “first kiss”. Very sweet and I also liked the response to the experience. So hopeful and lovely. H🌷
This is such a charming poem. I really enjoyed the loving gratitude in the recalling of the “first kiss”. Very sweet and I also liked the response to the experience. So hopeful and lovely. H🌷
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