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Entered The Hole
After they stripped, Jill entered
the hole and Ted followed her.
the hole and Ted followed her.
Published 29th May 2023
Author's Note
This nslope poem is about what a couple has done after discovering a new type of vortex inside a cave.
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30th May 2023 6:25am
Entering a cave in that way can have a sexual frisson as she leads him deeper into lust's underground.
30th May 2023 11:56am
