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Expedition Eyes
The narcotic of your name
pivots me insane.
An invasion of ecstasy,
infiltrating domains of myself.
Where I've built walls, barricaded halls
at the now throbbing entrance of my heart.
All this, from a single glance
of your expedition eyes.
Find me in my sweet oblivions
in which I fall.
Feverish with heat of inhibition's demise.
Your smile is scorching sun
in my dark and lightless crevices.
Warmth on my wounds.
The lip prints of your kiss
is the zenith of my bliss.
I'm a prisoner of this lustful war.
Resistance was never an option.
pivots me insane.
An invasion of ecstasy,
infiltrating domains of myself.
Where I've built walls, barricaded halls
at the now throbbing entrance of my heart.
All this, from a single glance
of your expedition eyes.
Find me in my sweet oblivions
in which I fall.
Feverish with heat of inhibition's demise.
Your smile is scorching sun
in my dark and lightless crevices.
Warmth on my wounds.
The lip prints of your kiss
is the zenith of my bliss.
I'm a prisoner of this lustful war.
Resistance was never an option.
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Re. Expedition Eyes
26th May 2023 12:29pm
Girl, this is another amazing poem. Every word resonated with me.
“Your smile is scorching sun in my dark and lightless crevices”
Love that.
Have a great day, dear poetess.
“Your smile is scorching sun in my dark and lightless crevices”
Love that.
Have a great day, dear poetess.
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26th May 2023 12:34pm
Aww. Thank you. I like that line too.
Writing is a salvation to me and brings me joy when I can resonate with people.
You have a wonderful day too!
Writing is a salvation to me and brings me joy when I can resonate with people.
You have a wonderful day too!
Re. Expedition Eyes
26th May 2023 12:46pm
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26th May 2023 12:49pm
Re. Expedition Eyes
26th May 2023 1:20pm
Excellent write db... from start to finish... excellent flow... nice rhyme...
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26th May 2023 2:36pm
Re. Expedition Eyes
26th May 2023 8:54pm
To be so truly lost within the vice grip of desire and obsession is often precarious. I found that last line so perfectly powerful... "Resistance was never an option" which reminds us how powerless one can be by passions, felt.
This was a juggernaut of deep emotional experiences that you penned with care and wonderfully intimate details.
Kudos, dear poetess... kudos.
Thank you for sharing your creative self with us!
🌹💙 - B
This was a juggernaut of deep emotional experiences that you penned with care and wonderfully intimate details.
Kudos, dear poetess... kudos.
Thank you for sharing your creative self with us!
🌹💙 - B
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Re: Re. Expedition Eyes
26th May 2023 9:21pm
Thank you so much for reading it.
Having a very hard day and you made my heart smile.
Passion can make you very powerless.
Thank you for making me feel so welcome here.
Have a magical night, sweet 💙 Blue
Having a very hard day and you made my heart smile.
Passion can make you very powerless.
Thank you for making me feel so welcome here.
Have a magical night, sweet 💙 Blue
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Re: Re. Expedition Eyes
27th May 2023 10:23am
Thank you so much for reading and your comments.
So nice when you stop bye. 🌹
So nice when you stop bye. 🌹
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28th May 2023 2:47am
It is. But in the summer I stood on a glacier in shorts and a tank top, it was 80 degrees.
And in winter the cold isn't as biting as the northeast.
And in winter the cold isn't as biting as the northeast.
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