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A Second Chance
Knowing I don't deserve
a second chance at life
I press on
Realizing I didn't die
after such life-threatening
Illness in my body
It could have
turned out differently
but for some reason
my life was spared
I remember in that
dark hospital room
praying to my Maker
saying I was ready
to be taken home
should it be my time
It was left
entirely up to Him
I didn't deserve
the second chance
that I was given so
there must still be
work to be done for me
to do on this Earth
or surely I would not have
pulled through
so that I could
write these words
out of gratitude
for simply
being alive.
a second chance at life
I press on
Realizing I didn't die
after such life-threatening
Illness in my body
It could have
turned out differently
but for some reason
my life was spared
I remember in that
dark hospital room
praying to my Maker
saying I was ready
to be taken home
should it be my time
It was left
entirely up to Him
I didn't deserve
the second chance
that I was given so
there must still be
work to be done for me
to do on this Earth
or surely I would not have
pulled through
so that I could
write these words
out of gratitude
for simply
being alive.
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Re. A Second Chance
21st May 2023 5:02pm
Re: Re. A Second Chance
22nd May 2023 4:48pm
Re. A Second Chance
21st May 2023 5:44pm
I understand that there is a purpose for you to fulfill in this world. With gratitude,you poured your words onto paper, a testament to the gift of life and the opportunity to share your journey as a poet. Amazing
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Re: Re. A Second Chance
22nd May 2023 4:52pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. They are very much appreciated!
Faith
Faith
Re. A Second Chance
21st May 2023 6:17pm
We all have a purpose. You are on the journey to find yours.
I always believe that things come to pass, not to stay.
So glad you are recovering. Stay strong. Sending (hugs) your way.
I always believe that things come to pass, not to stay.
So glad you are recovering. Stay strong. Sending (hugs) your way.
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Re: Re. A Second Chance
25th May 2023 8:38am
Re. A Second Chance
Hoping your doing better and you stick around and prove yourself wrong. You certainly deserve a second chance as all people do, well human people anyway. ☺️
Great expression happy you’re here Faith.
A new friend
Jackie ♥️
Great expression happy you’re here Faith.
A new friend
Jackie ♥️
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Re: Re. A Second Chance
23rd May 2023 9:27pm
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. I am recovering well and hope to write some more things soon.
Faith
Faith
Re: Re. A Second Chance
23rd May 2023 9:27pm
Re. A Second Chance
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Re: Re. A Second Chance
2nd Sep 2023 7:43am
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poems. It is much appreciated.
Faith
Faith
Re. A Second Chance
20th Mar 2024 9:07am
Hello faithmairee, how are you... I like your write very much, it feels real an pure. Straight from your thoughts, unfiltered, very well done... Take good care: deadwolf
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Re: Re. A Second Chance
21st Mar 2024 2:07pm
Thank you for reading and responding to my poem. I appreciate your wonderful response.