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no matter how far he reached
my father always looked
for the answers to life in
the bottom of a bottle
but no matter how many
bottoms he reached he
never found anything but
cold dead echoing silence...
from without
and finally
from within
Published 13th May 2023
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13th May 2023 3:33pm
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13th May 2023 5:35pm
Dear BK,
This is a poem where only a silent nod feels appropriate. Beautifully written.
H🌷
This is a poem where only a silent nod feels appropriate. Beautifully written.
H🌷
13th May 2023 6:04pm
13th May 2023 6:21pm
13th May 2023 6:31pm
Thank you, my dear Blue. Very much appreciated ( btw, just finished my expresso, lol).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th May 2023 4:03pm
Absolutely excellent!
Loved this: "but no matter how many
bottoms he reached he
never found anything but
cold dead echoing silence..."
Loved this: "but no matter how many
bottoms he reached he
never found anything but
cold dead echoing silence..."
14th May 2023 7:19pm
14th May 2023 11:04pm
15th May 2023 2:09am
15th May 2023 2:52am
15th May 2023 11:37pm
Such an impactful write and so sadly true .. if only they could see what that does to everyone who loves them.
Hugs
🦋
JeJe
Hugs
🦋
JeJe
15th May 2023 11:57pm
It's hard to for an alcoholic to see anything but the bottle in front of them.
Thank you, jemac. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, jemac. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th May 2023 2:05am
So much said in so few words. This truly packs a punch because you write it with such fire.
Not sure if it’s angry or sad.
At any rate great expression Buddhakitty ♥️
Hugs you darling 🤗
Love
Jackie xo
Not sure if it’s angry or sad.
At any rate great expression Buddhakitty ♥️
Hugs you darling 🤗
Love
Jackie xo
16th May 2023 2:53am
Mostly sadness now. Anger would not alter the course of history.
Thank you, Jackie. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Jackie. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th May 2023 4:24am
