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Dissociation
I lost conciseness,
but I was still awake.
It wasn’t really me.
I wasn’t really there.
I remember watching,
but I wasn’t in control.
I was lost inside my mind.
Nothing could make me feel more alone.
but I was still awake.
It wasn’t really me.
I wasn’t really there.
I remember watching,
but I wasn’t in control.
I was lost inside my mind.
Nothing could make me feel more alone.
Published 10th May 2023
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2nd Nov 2023 3:38am
Dear M,
Your poem is outstanding in describing that lost out of body experience. It’s the worst but your writing of it is fantastic. You know we’re but a poem away for chatting xx
H🌷
Your poem is outstanding in describing that lost out of body experience. It’s the worst but your writing of it is fantastic. You know we’re but a poem away for chatting xx
H🌷
