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Wise by the Dawning
The morning dance
The victorious oath
The celestial veil
That defines them both
The wisdom of self
The introduction to spirit
moments of clarity
If verity lies near it
Infinite forgiveness
Indolent gains
Severed intentions
Incompetent reigns
Persuaded and envied
Mastered and feigned
Histrionic enrapture
Choice capture;
Contained
Affair of contempt
A binding decree
In depth to the letter
Of fetter and free
Wise by the dawning
Bestowed by the shade
In reach of contentment
The sentiment is laid
Yearn for the masses
That blindly design
The imminence of rapture
Will cause realign
Whispering reason
A wealth of endeavour
A level of easement
The frequence we sever
Questionable markings;
A chimerical muse
An enfeebled existence
Will strengthen the ruse
The victorious oath
The celestial veil
That defines them both
The wisdom of self
The introduction to spirit
moments of clarity
If verity lies near it
Infinite forgiveness
Indolent gains
Severed intentions
Incompetent reigns
Persuaded and envied
Mastered and feigned
Histrionic enrapture
Choice capture;
Contained
Affair of contempt
A binding decree
In depth to the letter
Of fetter and free
Wise by the dawning
Bestowed by the shade
In reach of contentment
The sentiment is laid
Yearn for the masses
That blindly design
The imminence of rapture
Will cause realign
Whispering reason
A wealth of endeavour
A level of easement
The frequence we sever
Questionable markings;
A chimerical muse
An enfeebled existence
Will strengthen the ruse
Published 9th May 2023
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9th May 2023 4:38pm
Very distinct in observation and definition. I feel as though you must have quite an arsenal of vocabulary. There is a lot captured here. Your specific language creates the exact emotion that's suiting, within the transitions. I'll have to read it over again. Some of it goes over my head, ha-ha. Thank you for sharing!
9th May 2023 5:01pm
The concept is to overcome the normality of group think to become your own person, free from sources of indoctrination. To escape the lies the upper echelon use to keep the population in line. I am very much a free thinker and I tend to create my own path from that of the masses. Too many sheep; not enough wolves.
10th May 2023 3:33am
Your explanation above helped me to gain access to the intention of the writing, but I always find your writing erudite and interesting.
10th May 2023 12:47pm
