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I LOVE THE FEELING
I love the feeling
when, after peeling,
the cool air tenses
the bare skin's senses.
No embarrassment,
when others present
are doing the same,
regardless of frame.
In our birthday suits,
back to Eden roots
we are returning,
salving a yearning.
You become aware
less of being bare,
more 'being at one"
with sea, sky and sun.
It makes skinny dips
worth the two hour trips,
participating
so liberating.
Baptising in surf,
on face of the earth,
as the tide rolls in,
brine-washing the skin.
when, after peeling,
the cool air tenses
the bare skin's senses.
No embarrassment,
when others present
are doing the same,
regardless of frame.
In our birthday suits,
back to Eden roots
we are returning,
salving a yearning.
You become aware
less of being bare,
more 'being at one"
with sea, sky and sun.
It makes skinny dips
worth the two hour trips,
participating
so liberating.
Baptising in surf,
on face of the earth,
as the tide rolls in,
brine-washing the skin.
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