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Neurocosmic Odyssey
What sights and horrors do dreams entail?
Some that show how life is frail
And some that wait to tip the scale
Neurons fire like glistening stars
Yet still they find the mental scars
My thoughts are distant, like the planet Mars
I'm but a traveler in the wake of time
Through cosmic sands, and ethereal prime
In dreams I walk, in life's paradox rhyme
Some that show how life is frail
And some that wait to tip the scale
Neurons fire like glistening stars
Yet still they find the mental scars
My thoughts are distant, like the planet Mars
I'm but a traveler in the wake of time
Through cosmic sands, and ethereal prime
In dreams I walk, in life's paradox rhyme
Published 4th May 2023
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4th May 2023 7:58pm
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4th May 2023 9:27pm
i marvel at how You can rhyme and still spill
in a logical manner
Good stuff, this
in a logical manner
Good stuff, this
4th May 2023 9:53pm
You flatter me too much! Poetry just seems to come naturally to me. I'm glad you took the time to read my work!
