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Never Forgotten
Well, I must admit I wasn't expecting this wave of different emotions to occur
I wish it didn't still feel so fresh, I wish I could say that it was just a big blur.
But I can't; they say you never forget your first one
I'm inclined to agree that you don't, no matter how long since it's been over and done.
No matter how it happened the memories are still there
Happy or sad, these memories are painful, and rather quite unfair.
I thought it'd be ok, even though it had something with your name
I should've known better than to try and best love's cruel game.
For it struck again, reminding me there's still that unique pain
Reminding me that it'll never truly go away, that it's a permanent stain.
Time to put on that smile, and slip that old mask back on
And try to accept what happened, and just admit again that you're gone...
I wish it didn't still feel so fresh, I wish I could say that it was just a big blur.
But I can't; they say you never forget your first one
I'm inclined to agree that you don't, no matter how long since it's been over and done.
No matter how it happened the memories are still there
Happy or sad, these memories are painful, and rather quite unfair.
I thought it'd be ok, even though it had something with your name
I should've known better than to try and best love's cruel game.
For it struck again, reminding me there's still that unique pain
Reminding me that it'll never truly go away, that it's a permanent stain.
Time to put on that smile, and slip that old mask back on
And try to accept what happened, and just admit again that you're gone...
Published 13th Apr 2012
| Edited 14th Apr 2012
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Anonymous
13th Apr 2012 10:09pm
Love has never been promised to be easy but you just have to pick yourself up and keep going...eventually you will find the one person who truly deserves your heart :) Great write Caleb
14th Apr 2012 9:40am
Anonymous
13th Apr 2012 10:24pm
it got a little cheesy with the sharpie reference. That killed it for me. Especially when you started out so strong emotionally...:o otherwise it was an awesome write!
14th Apr 2012 9:39am
Lol ok I'll admit even I read this again and thought the same thing. I'll probably change it, just need to figure out what to put there. Thanks for the tip :)
14th Apr 2012 9:42am
15th Apr 2012 2:35am
You may have heard this quote before but,
"We come to love not by finding the perfect person, but by learning to love an imperfect person perfectly." - Unknown.
We just have to learn to differ those from who are worth the pain and who aren't.
We never forget our first love, I sure haven't.
(HUGS)
"We come to love not by finding the perfect person, but by learning to love an imperfect person perfectly." - Unknown.
We just have to learn to differ those from who are worth the pain and who aren't.
We never forget our first love, I sure haven't.
(HUGS)
15th Apr 2012 9:39am
I have heard it, and I do like that quote :) and no, we don't -__- thank you BlackRoseLove (hugs) gotta love hugs ^_^
15th Apr 2012 4:23am
Caleb this is amazing I can feel the emotion honestly I cried when I read this
15th Apr 2012 9:41am
Well thank you firesister :) I hadn't planned on writing a poem, but once I started writing I figured why not lol. It's not my usual length of poem, but oh well.
