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dry petals
I am a brown autumn
I want a green
sweltering summer
a breeze yellow spring
and uffff a white snowy winter...
My body is
as fickle as water
I need your touch
as delicate as a squirrel
I should stay on one side
if you measure my depth...
My petals are
as dry as dry berries
I want a few white drops of you
like the white full moon,
I want to bloom like a red rose
I want your silvery warmth...
I want a green
sweltering summer
a breeze yellow spring
and uffff a white snowy winter...
My body is
as fickle as water
I need your touch
as delicate as a squirrel
I should stay on one side
if you measure my depth...
My petals are
as dry as dry berries
I want a few white drops of you
like the white full moon,
I want to bloom like a red rose
I want your silvery warmth...
Published 1st May 2023
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1st May 2023 6:55pm
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2nd May 2023 1:51am
He gave his seed deep inside of you while you in orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
2nd May 2023 3:07am
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4th May 2023 4:49pm
I added this to my list last night
but still had to try and
digest the longing ache in these verses.
the metaphors are lovely,
there is a universal humanness
in the want of intimacy whether
sexual or otherwise
that you've translated so eloquently
thank you for a wonderful read
♡ yiyi
but still had to try and
digest the longing ache in these verses.
the metaphors are lovely,
there is a universal humanness
in the want of intimacy whether
sexual or otherwise
that you've translated so eloquently
thank you for a wonderful read
♡ yiyi
4th May 2023 5:14pm
Thank You Very much for stopping by! And I'm glad that you appreciate my writing!
19th May 2023 7:59pm
26th May 2023 3:52am
Hey there
Thanks much for visiting
I admire your feedback
N yaa welcome to DUP
All the best'
Thanks much for visiting
I admire your feedback
N yaa welcome to DUP
All the best'
Anonymous
4th Jul 2024 7:18pm
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5th Jul 2024 3:10am
