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the rain
the clouds are thundering
the couple is getting wet under the roof
the storm left its stains on the bed,
on the couch and the bathroom
the couple is getting wet under the roof
the storm left its stains on the bed,
on the couch and the bathroom
Published 29th Apr 2023
| Edited 30th Apr 2023
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29th Apr 2023 5:17pm
Wow very hot metaphor written in this piece dimpy... you captured the moment so well in ink :)
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Thanks much! Yupp it's cause of you, you told me about this idea of sex! Well once again thank you!
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30th Apr 2023 8:44pm
Now that is great erotica, very graphic to the imagination. A really great write.
Cheers
Cheers
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