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My Crevassed Heart for You
My crevassed heart kept glued
with shards of sweet-talk bullshit.
This crack in my heart divided suddenly,
further parting, webbing across my soul.
Love composed of a glued heart –
shards of such a bond – so fragile.
Concluding as a canyon, both halves of
our once-shared soul parted forever.
This glue of my bullshit sweet lies
kept our broken relationship together!
with shards of sweet-talk bullshit.
This crack in my heart divided suddenly,
further parting, webbing across my soul.
Love composed of a glued heart –
shards of such a bond – so fragile.
Concluding as a canyon, both halves of
our once-shared soul parted forever.
This glue of my bullshit sweet lies
kept our broken relationship together!
Published 29th Apr 2023
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29th Apr 2023 12:23pm
Very emotional hearttouching words, somewhere the glue of true love keeps two humans and their souls together. Even if they are not together, the feelings remain.
29th Apr 2023 12:25pm
I love your analysis of this moiece dimpy! I like to make multiple meanings to any piece for fun for the reader!
29th Apr 2023 7:32pm
Brilliant! Keep doing your work and moving forward! Waiting for your next stuff 😊
29th Apr 2023 2:48pm
i ALWAYS know that if we use the wrong type of glue, say, Fugitive Glue, then the bonds are strong enough to weather anyone's bullshit
This spill is packed with sad memories and retrospection and although sad, it reads well
This spill is packed with sad memories and retrospection and although sad, it reads well
