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When We Make Love
It’s thunder, it’s lightning
And fireworks combined.
Passion’s intensity,
Focus without time.
It’s cascading fire,
Torrents of rain.
It’s absolute heaven,
Sweet pleasure & pain.
I drift to paradise
From body and mind,
Penetrating deep,
Still intertwined.
The waves are pounding,
Ecstasy bout to start.
In passionate succession,
Creating total art.
Reaching earth shattering peak,
Soaring high like a dove.
With you all of these things I behold
When we make love.
-Erotika xx
And fireworks combined.
Passion’s intensity,
Focus without time.
It’s cascading fire,
Torrents of rain.
It’s absolute heaven,
Sweet pleasure & pain.
I drift to paradise
From body and mind,
Penetrating deep,
Still intertwined.
The waves are pounding,
Ecstasy bout to start.
In passionate succession,
Creating total art.
Reaching earth shattering peak,
Soaring high like a dove.
With you all of these things I behold
When we make love.
-Erotika xx
Published 28th Apr 2023
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28th Apr 2023 7:10am
Poem goes so well with this picture especially these verses:
I drift to paradise
From body and mind,
Penetrating deep,
Still intertwined.
The waves are pounding,
Ecstasy bout to start.
In passionate succession,
Creating total art.
I drift to paradise
From body and mind,
Penetrating deep,
Still intertwined.
The waves are pounding,
Ecstasy bout to start.
In passionate succession,
Creating total art.
28th Apr 2023 1:31pm
Wow this is a great ink Erotika... you capture the moment so well. Have a wonderful weekend :)
30th Apr 2023 3:43am
