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faith of our tennis shoes
faith is like a wad of old
gum that you step on
walking down the street
you know it's there
but it doesn't do you
any good
you stop, scrape it
off
and get on with
life
Published 26th Apr 2023
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26th Apr 2023 9:54am
Dear BK,
For me there’s a whimsical truth to this that I found funny because it rings so true. I love your poetic mindset. H🌷
For me there’s a whimsical truth to this that I found funny because it rings so true. I love your poetic mindset. H🌷
26th Apr 2023 12:16pm
26th Apr 2023 3:22pm
Quite so. Except for the extremists who stick to faith like glue.......or chewing gum on their shoe.
26th Apr 2023 3:28pm
23rd Jun 2023 8:20pm
These metaphors on daily average situations give more meaning when spilled in witty smart poetry.
Great stuff.
Great stuff.
24th Jun 2023 1:14am
