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Symmetric (Backwards)

we are in motion all of the time
we're in a garden, we're in our mind
every time we slip away
every moment, every day

self like a flower which we unfurl
never a straight line, always a twirl
all is in motion, all that we trust
atoms and planets, ions and dust

while breathing out away we all spin
every moment while breathing in
twisting and turning every day
magnetic attraction, pushing away

knowing that always this will be real
with only love the feeling we feel
living forever without any fears
consciousness bound by time disappears

into awaking from the Earth's dream
into a glittering, sparkling gleam
spiraling faster into a jewel
resistance is futile, magnetically pulled...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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Author's Note
this is  my poem Symmetric (forward) read with lines in reverse order..it made sense to me...a kind of poetic symmetry therefore the title....best listened to with headphones
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