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eclipse
Once upon a time
I was passing through
a street, say that I was
flying like a bird n
the atmosphere was lovely
The rays of morning sun
beauty of shimmering light
was making my spirit dance
with unspeakable delight.
I stopped at one place
while flying, as I saw
something very beautiful
A boy with blue eyes
like the transparent blue ocean,
black haired, long face,
a little beard and a smile
ufffff….that is extremely adorable
When he laughed,
it was as if all the flowers
in the garden were laughing
amazing dimples were emerging
on the both of his cheeks
I stopped at my place
as soon as I saw him
like my time stopped,
I fell in love with him
at the very first sight
On the eastern horizon,
my emotions was joining
the gorgeous sun
with the clouds of majesty,
n when as soon as I go to
touch that heavenly fun
He was obviously a stranger,
yet I was like bowed
in front of him like a sunflower
and I heard this sun was eclipsed
n now my time has became
like alternate phases of the moon,
like the light half of the lunar month
from the new-moon to full-moon and
the dark half of same month
he was living the
last moments of his life,
He had a terrible disease,
which was going to kill him
Because my spirit
was so deeply charmed
and so affectionately
involved in his blue soul
I was watching my downfall
I was dispirited and
heartbroken..lonely, sad,
depressed and withdrawn
But he was shining like a
full-moon and was looking
so liberated and sublime.
and after seeing him joyous
I too felt very inspired and elated.
I was passing through
a street, say that I was
flying like a bird n
the atmosphere was lovely
The rays of morning sun
beauty of shimmering light
was making my spirit dance
with unspeakable delight.
I stopped at one place
while flying, as I saw
something very beautiful
A boy with blue eyes
like the transparent blue ocean,
black haired, long face,
a little beard and a smile
ufffff….that is extremely adorable
When he laughed,
it was as if all the flowers
in the garden were laughing
amazing dimples were emerging
on the both of his cheeks
I stopped at my place
as soon as I saw him
like my time stopped,
I fell in love with him
at the very first sight
On the eastern horizon,
my emotions was joining
the gorgeous sun
with the clouds of majesty,
n when as soon as I go to
touch that heavenly fun
He was obviously a stranger,
yet I was like bowed
in front of him like a sunflower
and I heard this sun was eclipsed
n now my time has became
like alternate phases of the moon,
like the light half of the lunar month
from the new-moon to full-moon and
the dark half of same month
he was living the
last moments of his life,
He had a terrible disease,
which was going to kill him
Because my spirit
was so deeply charmed
and so affectionately
involved in his blue soul
I was watching my downfall
I was dispirited and
heartbroken..lonely, sad,
depressed and withdrawn
But he was shining like a
full-moon and was looking
so liberated and sublime.
and after seeing him joyous
I too felt very inspired and elated.
Published 19th Apr 2023
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
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Many many thanks cath for always being here, for always supporting me with your kind and heartwarming words. I'm glad that you liked my write up, n I'm thankful that you visiting me.💓
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
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Welcome to DUP
N many thanks for reading me and for your beautiful response! Keep writing
Welcome to DUP
N many thanks for reading me and for your beautiful response! Keep writing
