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Seductress Spider
Gracefully, she slides on silk,
An acrobat of subtle skill.
Swinging on her crystal rope,
She searches for a mate to kill.
Centered in her shining web,
That emblem of the wheel of fate.
Suspended by a single thread,
She spies the victim she will mate.
Swiftly, she surrounds her prey,
Wrapping him in satin sheets.
Salivating, she smells his blood,
His sublime ecstasy of defeat.
Salaciously, she sucks and stings.
He struggles, but must submit.
Ravishing him in a mating dance,
He can't resist her love's pit.
Smirking, she devours his essence,
As his frantic death throes subside.
Sinister with a venomous kiss,
She finishes him until completely satisfied.
An acrobat of subtle skill.
Swinging on her crystal rope,
She searches for a mate to kill.
Centered in her shining web,
That emblem of the wheel of fate.
Suspended by a single thread,
She spies the victim she will mate.
Swiftly, she surrounds her prey,
Wrapping him in satin sheets.
Salivating, she smells his blood,
His sublime ecstasy of defeat.
Salaciously, she sucks and stings.
He struggles, but must submit.
Ravishing him in a mating dance,
He can't resist her love's pit.
Smirking, she devours his essence,
As his frantic death throes subside.
Sinister with a venomous kiss,
She finishes him until completely satisfied.
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Re. Seductress Spider
16th Apr 2023 5:10pm
https://youtu.be/yRYFKcMa_Ek
Enjoy my referenced New York State of mind, my King, and have a fantastic Suday and a great upcoming week.
Enjoy my referenced New York State of mind, my King, and have a fantastic Suday and a great upcoming week.
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16th Apr 2023 6:01pm
OMG what a classic cut from the 80s! They are my favorite duo with other hits too. Thx for sharing that and your wonderful visit my queen... you always make me smile. Enjoy the rest of the day too... and the week ahead :))
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16th Apr 2023 6:13pm
I thought that ballad recommendation would add some flavor to that amazing poetic gem you posted above, and thank you for the Sunday well wishes, in regard to your unbiased sentiment, you are humbly welcome, always.
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Re. Seductress Spider
16th Apr 2023 6:04pm
I think you've been mislead by some women black widows...there are still beautiful women to be had I love your employment of metaphors...
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Hi raven... this piece is just a fantasy write for fun... my friend challenge me long time ago to write something dark and erotic. I appreciate your read and thoughts :)
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16th Apr 2023 9:30pm
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17th Apr 2023 6:41am
Aww thank you for the sweet invite raven... a pleasure *smiles* To let you know in advance... dark writes is not my strong side... that's why my friend challenge me to take a shot at it... but I do enjoy reading other peoples dark work. :)
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20th Apr 2023 3:30pm
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Re. Seductress Spider
16th Apr 2023 10:10pm
Hi Magic I know it's been a while and miss some of your writes. This one right here is fire! You never disappoint and I can't wait to catch up with the rest of your poems. I hope you enjoy the evening poet
-Erotika xx
-Erotika xx
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Re: Re. Seductress Spider
17th Apr 2023 6:44am
Thank you Erotika for your wonderful feedback... I'm glad you're back... take your time hehe :)
Re. Seductress Spider
17th Apr 2023 2:03am
Amazing. I’m inspired by the Master of Flow!
Hot poem, MV.
Hope you have a fantastic week.
Hot poem, MV.
Hope you have a fantastic week.
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17th Apr 2023 6:48am
Aww thank you Her for your awesome feedback... I hope your weekend was good... Have a wonderful week too... stay safe and well :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th Apr 2023 2:43am
17th Apr 2023 2:41am
This was sublime, I loved the darkly erotic imagery. Thank you for sharing 💛
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17th Apr 2023 6:54am
Thank you so much Oliviahoney for your lovely feedback and add... it were a pleasure to share this one :D
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25th Apr 2023 6:40pm
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25th Apr 2023 9:23pm
Thank you so much Kunoichi for the wonderful feedback... I hope you have a wonderful Tuesday :)
Re. Seductress Spider
27th Jun 2023 6:52am
Sinister with a venomous kiss,
She finishes him until completely satisfied.
Awesome!!!
She finishes him until completely satisfied.
Awesome!!!
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27th Jun 2023 10:52am
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