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Majesty of Magenta
My eyes, throbbing with agony,
bore through the window,
desperately seeking the freedom of sky.
To my surprise the crabapple tree
possessed joyous magenta flowers,
providing an unexpected
jubilant assault of my mind.
Lush leafy erratic branches,
a turmoil of spring beauty
stood in striking empathy of my silent cries.
The afternoon sun pales the majesty of magenta.
As only love can pale agony.
Memories live forever, is a haunting horrible lie.
Unlike me, those magenta flowers don't need a why....
My love for her will never die.
The majesty of those magenta flowers,
if only for a moment, seizes and saves me deep inside.
bore through the window,
desperately seeking the freedom of sky.
To my surprise the crabapple tree
possessed joyous magenta flowers,
providing an unexpected
jubilant assault of my mind.
Lush leafy erratic branches,
a turmoil of spring beauty
stood in striking empathy of my silent cries.
The afternoon sun pales the majesty of magenta.
As only love can pale agony.
Memories live forever, is a haunting horrible lie.
Unlike me, those magenta flowers don't need a why....
My love for her will never die.
The majesty of those magenta flowers,
if only for a moment, seizes and saves me deep inside.
Author's Note
Just sitting with my mom as dementia slowly steals her mind. It's agony to know I've lost her, even though she is still alive. My love for her will never die...
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Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 11:18am
Oh how this aches... I am dealing with this with my father... sending positivity your way...
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Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 11:23am
Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 11:31am
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Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 3:21pm
Hold on to what you can to make it through the day, dear lady. Your own precious memories of the two of you are something only you have that can perhaps stir those little moments of clarity for her, though it may be emotionally difficult, I believe they are like little gifts to offer, in the end. I feel your pain of loss and hurt, so clearly.... sending hugs. I know we're all different but I can wholeheartedly relate, Debbie.
Take care, my dear....
Thinking of you both.
Wonderfully poeted -
🌹💙
B
Take care, my dear....
Thinking of you both.
Wonderfully poeted -
🌹💙
B
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Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 3:36pm
Thank you for your understanding, there are small moments of clarity I do cherish. Thx for hugs. It's the most painful time of my life, but I'm writing a lot.
Appreciate the love 💜
Appreciate the love 💜
Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 7:29pm
I don't think I can say much to relieve the agony. I watched my wife disintegrate and there is no feeling that can describe what you are going through. Love her and cherish her.
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Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 7:35pm
Thank you. I do love her, that's why I'm caring for her. The visciousness of dementia upon the mind is brutal.
I can imagine losing your wife like that. Agonizing pain. Thx for reading the poem.
I can imagine losing your wife like that. Agonizing pain. Thx for reading the poem.
Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
15th Apr 2023 7:37pm
Re. Majesty of Magenta
16th Apr 2023 4:39am
Darling, I'm so sorry you're going through this. You painted a beautiful tribute, and the way you used nature to show that there is beauty still in the pain was really lovely.
Be well, beautiful. You wrote an amazing poem, and my thoughts are with you.
Be well, beautiful. You wrote an amazing poem, and my thoughts are with you.
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Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
16th Apr 2023 10:13am
Thank you so much Betty. Everyone is so kind to me, I feel like I can be vulnerable with my writing.
I smile everytime I read a comment from you.
Be well too 🖤
I smile everytime I read a comment from you.
Be well too 🖤
Re. Majesty of Magenta
16th Apr 2023 9:39am
Beautifully articulated Debbie,
Strong meaningful imagery. Great read.
No lazy sentences, each one considered. Excellent stuff.
Regards,
BITS
Strong meaningful imagery. Great read.
No lazy sentences, each one considered. Excellent stuff.
Regards,
BITS
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Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
16th Apr 2023 10:14am
Thank you ever so much! Just trying to turn some of my pain into beauty. Your nice comments made me feel really good, thanks. 🌹
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Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
17th Apr 2023 10:34am
My eyes are misty reading your kind comment.
Thank you so much. ❤️
Have a wonderful day.
Thank you so much. ❤️
Have a wonderful day.
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Re: Re. Majesty of Magenta
21st Apr 2023 11:38pm
I do remember about your father. Sometimes I do feel like I should be up for sainthood with the rages I deal with, with my mom.
Right now we are watching a movie, and she's calm, a rare moment of coherency. Those moments and the beauty in nature soothes my sadness are how I get through the acid like agony that burns inside.
Thank you for reading and your support.
Right now we are watching a movie, and she's calm, a rare moment of coherency. Those moments and the beauty in nature soothes my sadness are how I get through the acid like agony that burns inside.
Thank you for reading and your support.
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Re. Majesty of Magenta
1st May 2023 9:25am
Oh Delia
This is such a touching and beautiful write but agonising all at the same time, I cannot imagine the pain and hurt you must go through while dealing with dementia and the rage it must stir at times, if I was there I would share all the good hugs and hot drinks with you, take care of you and keep writing those beautiful lines.
Kind Regards
-A
This is such a touching and beautiful write but agonising all at the same time, I cannot imagine the pain and hurt you must go through while dealing with dementia and the rage it must stir at times, if I was there I would share all the good hugs and hot drinks with you, take care of you and keep writing those beautiful lines.
Kind Regards
-A
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Re. Majesty of Magenta
1st May 2023 11:14am
Thank you so much for your kindness. It really means a lot to me. ❤️
And you keep writing your beautiful lines too!
And you keep writing your beautiful lines too!