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Can I trust you?
I was depressed
was need for healing
of the soul
he came...
he made me feel love light
he became the reason
of my happiness
I hung my happiness
in his hands
I asked him.. can I trust you?
n he said
"Love can hurt
nd love can heal n
sometimes it's fake
nd sometimes real"
n lastly he cheated
he lied
he is gone,
when I needed.
was need for healing
of the soul
he came...
he made me feel love light
he became the reason
of my happiness
I hung my happiness
in his hands
I asked him.. can I trust you?
n he said
"Love can hurt
nd love can heal n
sometimes it's fake
nd sometimes real"
n lastly he cheated
he lied
he is gone,
when I needed.
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7th Apr 2023 1:13pm
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7th Apr 2023 1:53pm
You moved me when you said, I hung my happiness in his hands. Beautiful vulnerability here.
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7th Apr 2023 2:06pm
Thanks a ton daniel for reading n adding my words in your RL. It's unexpetable. I'm glad that you liked.
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11th Apr 2023 9:17am
I actually thought that was going to be a happy ending then your dropped the hammer. Fantastic work.
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