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riffs and inventions II
I
clock next
to bed
minutes
buzzing by
angry fly's
of time
light
a
smoke
II
autobiography
last
chapter
written
yesterday
III
cat on
my lap
whiskers
purring
fur
Buddha
IV
walk across
street
dodging
cars
thinking of
dinner
pasta
V
murder
your
past
freedom
VI
waiting
how much
longer will
longer be
there's an
ant on my
shoe
Published 5th Apr 2023
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- Edited 11th May 2023 7:18pm
5th Apr 2023 9:01pm
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6th Apr 2023 10:35pm
Thank you for your kind words, Wired6.very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
11th May 2023 5:55pm
Thank you, wally.
I am still dealing w/ the aftermath of my broken hip. Getting better, but not fast enough for me.
Thank you for asking.
Really enjoyed your work during April. It was most excellent. Hope you read my comments.
hugs,
buddhakitty
I am still dealing w/ the aftermath of my broken hip. Getting better, but not fast enough for me.
Thank you for asking.
Really enjoyed your work during April. It was most excellent. Hope you read my comments.
hugs,
buddhakitty
8th Apr 2023 8:20pm
"How much longer will longer be"
"Angry flys of time"
And buddhakitty goes boom! Great great lines!
Your cat is named Buddha? My little dog (that stays at the ex's house with the other dog) I named Booda. She's six pounds of furry awesome.
"Angry flys of time"
And buddhakitty goes boom! Great great lines!
Your cat is named Buddha? My little dog (that stays at the ex's house with the other dog) I named Booda. She's six pounds of furry awesome.
8th Apr 2023 9:34pm
No...no cat ( but I love doggies and kitties).
Thank you for the boom.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the boom.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
11th May 2023 3:31pm
It’s the small details we often overlook that makes for capturing great poetry. Well done
