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Your Eyes
The grip of your eyes unlock a lost world inside of me.
Your eyes disrobe me of logic and sanity.
You entered my life barren of invitation.
Yet the want of you obliterates all else.
Your searching eyes excavate the depths beyond my depths.
You possess ancient knowledge of me,
you crack open my sordid secrets.
Your gaze is so profound,
my every guard lays dismantled
upon my aching ground.
Your eyes disrobe me of logic and sanity.
You entered my life barren of invitation.
Yet the want of you obliterates all else.
Your searching eyes excavate the depths beyond my depths.
You possess ancient knowledge of me,
you crack open my sordid secrets.
Your gaze is so profound,
my every guard lays dismantled
upon my aching ground.
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Re. Your Eyes
Anonymous
4th Apr 2023 3:10pm
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Huge smile. You perceived with perfection exactly what I was trying to convey. Writing the poem may not be as exciting as your beautiful comments. Lol
Your opinion deeply inspires me.
Your opinion deeply inspires me.
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5th Apr 2023 5:30pm
This text was found to have been created using a chat bot AI, according to this website.
https://www.zerogpt.com/
https://www.zerogpt.com/
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5th Apr 2023 7:06pm
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6th Apr 2023 12:00pm
I can't speak for Daniel of course but he's noticed a familiar pattern in Mr.Black's comments/critique that may suggest they've been run though a computer program, rather than having been generated from his heart. However interesting, flattering & real they appear, it does look as though a robot has written them.😊
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Re. Your Eyes
4th Apr 2023 3:21pm
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4th Apr 2023 4:03pm
When I look into this man's eyes, I feel paralyzed to do anything but surrender. 😊 Thx for reading
Re. Your Eyes
4th Apr 2023 3:52pm
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4th Apr 2023 4:04pm
Re. Your Eyes
6th Apr 2023 7:01pm
I like this...seriously. The best way to know a person is to know their soul. A person comes with ingredients but it is up to us to read the fine print. That has got me through life and I don't believe in what I can't see or touch. I believe in myself and those with common sense. Keep up the good writing.
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6th Apr 2023 7:32pm
Thank you, your opinion means a lot! I'm a bit rattled by this chatbot thing, not feeling too great about posting anything.
Re. Your Eyes
9th Apr 2023 8:18am
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9th Apr 2023 10:16am
Thanks so much, that means a lot to me.
Have a happy holiday if you celebrate
Have a happy holiday if you celebrate
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11th Apr 2023 6:08am
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11th Apr 2023 10:12am
Re. Your Eyes
14th Apr 2023 9:51am
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14th Apr 2023 11:03am
Huge smile 😊
You are so kind to me.
And have been there for me when I've become discouraged.
I hope I can create more poetry people enjoy.
You are so kind to me.
And have been there for me when I've become discouraged.
I hope I can create more poetry people enjoy.
Re. Your Eyes
21st Oct 2023 00:42am
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21st Oct 2023 1:46am
Eyes are the windows into the deepest parts of the soul. Thank you for commenting, I forgot how much I like this one.
Have a great weekend 🌙
Have a great weekend 🌙