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Haiku
Sunsets on the beach
Lovers walking hand in hand
Wind against the waves
Written by
FrostyMittens
(Jennifer Hill)
Published
4th Apr 2023
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Re. Haiku
Anonymous
4th Apr 2023 2:50am
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FrostyMittens
(Jennifer Hill)
4th Apr 2023 3:05pm
Thank you very much. I enjoy getting elaborate feedback on my poems. Moe Haiku poems to come...
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Re. Haiku
Honoria
4th Apr 2023 4:43am
Dear J,
I very much enjoyed the scenario you’ve created in this write. Haiku/senyru are challenging because of the limited syllables yet you’ve managed to give us an entire story those 17 syllables. Lovely. H🌷
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FrostyMittens
(Jennifer Hill)
4th Apr 2023 3:05pm
Thank you very much
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Re. Haiku
abetterstart
(james skinner)
11th Apr 2023 7:13am
i like your haikus
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FrostyMittens
(Jennifer Hill)
11th Apr 2023 7:15am
Thank you. Many more to come!
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