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Glistening Neon
She was one for never not getting what she wants
her eyes a glistening neon
grabbing for all her wants
her needs, his inattention
her seductive nature
reprimanding and requesting
his presence
pulling him near with desire
love bites written upon his skin
she his fated sin
lost was he
night disappearing into her body
tonguing and whispering in her ear
"ravish me,
take advantage of this throbbing greed"
let go, let live
soon we'll soar and be free
her eyes a glistening neon
grabbing for all her wants
her needs, his inattention
her seductive nature
reprimanding and requesting
his presence
pulling him near with desire
love bites written upon his skin
she his fated sin
lost was he
night disappearing into her body
tonguing and whispering in her ear
"ravish me,
take advantage of this throbbing greed"
let go, let live
soon we'll soar and be free
Published 31st Mar 2023
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1st Apr 2023 8:11am
2nd Apr 2023 1:05am
1st Apr 2023 10:25pm
Hi Tim:)
Loved the opening line!
This came across elegant but with some attitude. haha
Loved the opening line!
This came across elegant but with some attitude. haha
2nd Apr 2023 1:05am
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