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Orchid
It was by the shore I first sensed her
lit up by the orchids
reminiscent in yesterday's yearn
looking above from the grasses
where I lay
her mounds were precocious
surrounded
in the mist of mind
surrendering to only
the way of the bend
she bit me with her lashes
accentuating the life in her eye
a spherical vision of beauty
illuminating on a very particular day
she swayed
an end of an era
where only she belonged
winds moved
still she stood
still
stuck, in love with my stare
she stayed
lit up by the orchids
reminiscent in yesterday's yearn
looking above from the grasses
where I lay
her mounds were precocious
surrounded
in the mist of mind
surrendering to only
the way of the bend
she bit me with her lashes
accentuating the life in her eye
a spherical vision of beauty
illuminating on a very particular day
she swayed
an end of an era
where only she belonged
winds moved
still she stood
still
stuck, in love with my stare
she stayed
Published 24th Mar 2023
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24th Mar 2023 6:43pm
25th Mar 2023 10:30am
27th Mar 2023 10:36pm
There's a beautiful permeance spurred by the tremendous phrasing and imagery which easily captivated me.... swept me away..
Thank you.
🌹B
Thank you.
🌹B
16th Apr 2023 3:23pm
A great poem.
Like the other ones from you I’ve been reading here.
A fluent and persona style I truly appreciate
Thanks for that nice reading moment
Like the other ones from you I’ve been reading here.
A fluent and persona style I truly appreciate
Thanks for that nice reading moment
