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A hammer
My brain is back
with a hammer
hitting hard on my corpse
shouting
and screaming
that's the way
that's the way
girl.
Forget it
Forget your good days.
And I shout back
Why
Why
Why on the goddamn earth?
with a hammer
hitting hard on my corpse
shouting
and screaming
that's the way
that's the way
girl.
Forget it
Forget your good days.
And I shout back
Why
Why
Why on the goddamn earth?
Published 31st Mar 2023
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31st Mar 2023 7:26pm
Potently expressed metaphor I think. Succinct but impacting, no pun intended.
1st Apr 2023 2:33am
