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Promises
She offered
Loyalty
Understanding
Acceptance
Trust
He promised
Integrity
Transparency
Forgiveness
The truth
He professed
Love
Compassion
Growth
Respect
He delivered
Excuses
Selfishness
Dishonesty
Obession
He chose
To hide
To pretend
To obsess
To lie
He blamed
Unawareness
Ignorance
Naivety
Mental incompacity
He broke,
her trust
He stole,
her last chance
She chose
To quit
Withdraw
Take back control
And finally... HERSELF!
Published 29th Mar 2023
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29th Mar 2023 12:28pm
Sad start but powerful positive ending. Great writing. Hugs and peace, Oral xo
29th Mar 2023 12:29pm
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29th Mar 2023 1:23pm
29th Mar 2023 1:03pm
Dear J,
I liked the reclaimed power of self at the end. It’s so difficult to know how another will show their true colors after the initial blush of a relationship morphs into the nitty gritty. Wonderful message of strength and moving onward. H🌷
I liked the reclaimed power of self at the end. It’s so difficult to know how another will show their true colors after the initial blush of a relationship morphs into the nitty gritty. Wonderful message of strength and moving onward. H🌷
29th Mar 2023 1:25pm
Everyday is a new day with brand new possibilities , thank you for you kind words ❤️
29th Mar 2023 1:33pm
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30th Mar 2023 2:00am
You are a beautiful strong smart sexy woman who find someone who treat like the princess you are. Keep on writing.
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31st Mar 2023 11:35pm
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1st Apr 2023 4:39am
3rd Apr 2023 1:05pm
Truth and reality are powerful forced for making tough decisions. Hugs and peace, Oral
4th Apr 2023 00:15am
Men! Typical. I know cos I am one myself. Women always love harder than men, from my experience,
4th Apr 2023 9:18am
Thank you for your feedback , always appreciated .
I'm no man hater, not by a long shot but in my experience men typically lie and justify it by saying they are protecting their partner. Women are typically not fragile creatures in need of protection.
I'm no man hater, not by a long shot but in my experience men typically lie and justify it by saying they are protecting their partner. Women are typically not fragile creatures in need of protection.
22nd Apr 2023 1:22pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely deep and inspirational 👏 🙌 beautiful musing my lady 👩 ♥ please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
22nd Apr 2023 1:51pm
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31st Aug 2023 00:22am
"No relationship is ever a waste of time. If it didn't bring you what you want, it taught you what you don't want." — Author Unknown
“One day you’re going to remember me and how much I loved you … and then you’re going to hate yourself for letting me go.” — Drake
Good for you for walking. Be strong. You will be in demand.
“One day you’re going to remember me and how much I loved you … and then you’re going to hate yourself for letting me go.” — Drake
Good for you for walking. Be strong. You will be in demand.
