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A Sapphic Talibanic
Fuck it. Curse those who embrace death and quibble
to be from our cerebra fast divorced
or abandon every bodacious scribble...
carnally endorsed.
Why from a yearning are so many averse
and hand off their fates to common hate and war
renting too much the services of a hearse...
rather than a whore?
And certainly there is no perfection there
but I would have scandal with her helping hand
forevermore than more bombers in the air,
savaging the land.
And so we wrench experimental tools
to reduce the absurd from all our thoughts
swapping soldiers for lesser porn star fools,
and their money shots...
for these are the shots from which mankind survives,
even when they fill the sockets of the eye,
or festoons the tits on extra horny wives,
or an open thigh!
Think not of urethrae for the piss they piss
but as an auger for convocated seed
mobilized by a tumescent friendly kiss,
and a special greed.
How is all this not superior to pain?
Save the piss for the fundamentalist goon
who would upon all beauty some burqas deign,
as a crude buffoon...
spending nights with an AK-47
rather than experiencing mortal love
due to deceitful promises of heaven...
in afterlife above.
to be from our cerebra fast divorced
or abandon every bodacious scribble...
carnally endorsed.
Why from a yearning are so many averse
and hand off their fates to common hate and war
renting too much the services of a hearse...
rather than a whore?
And certainly there is no perfection there
but I would have scandal with her helping hand
forevermore than more bombers in the air,
savaging the land.
And so we wrench experimental tools
to reduce the absurd from all our thoughts
swapping soldiers for lesser porn star fools,
and their money shots...
for these are the shots from which mankind survives,
even when they fill the sockets of the eye,
or festoons the tits on extra horny wives,
or an open thigh!
Think not of urethrae for the piss they piss
but as an auger for convocated seed
mobilized by a tumescent friendly kiss,
and a special greed.
How is all this not superior to pain?
Save the piss for the fundamentalist goon
who would upon all beauty some burqas deign,
as a crude buffoon...
spending nights with an AK-47
rather than experiencing mortal love
due to deceitful promises of heaven...
in afterlife above.
Published 29th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Fukkin obvious. Make love, not war.
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29th Mar 2023 8:42am
29th Mar 2023 9:09am
Make love not war, the updated porn hub steaming version?... Your mind is epic..That cutting wit is beyond incredibly cool, especially when you incorporate it into such wonderfully structured poems.
(I had written make love not war before reading your Author's Note, so that made me feel accomplished.... lol!)
Love the idea of money shots and shots.... clever clever!
Such an excellent read, MS
Thank you
🌹 💙
(I had written make love not war before reading your Author's Note, so that made me feel accomplished.... lol!)
Love the idea of money shots and shots.... clever clever!
Such an excellent read, MS
Thank you
🌹 💙
I don't think people have to be very smart to see the advantages that love has over war and yet we still, as a species at least, mire ourselves in real life horror shows such as Ukraine, Iraq, Lebanon, Syria, and Tennessee.
At the core of what gets the hate train rolling is always some cash motivated cadre of stone hearted cowardly dudes who think guns are justice, in and of themselves, and clearly will never lift a legislative or fiscal finger to keep our public places and people from getting shot to pieces.
Compared to this craze the porn stars seem like saints! But sometimes the comparisons are not as blunt as they need to be to get through the thick layers of outdated and contemporary morality based law that sets so many of us up for failure.
For example, we all know that cigarettes are bad but at least they don't make heads explode into buckets of chunky blood all over the classroom, or church furnishings.
Comparison (metaphor) is everything in the grossly overlooked thought laboratory of reductio ad absurdum, which soon has its practitioners realize that both morality and legislation are a kind of triage where the public needs to get smart about who we decide to have dying first, and how...and who we vote for.
If they started actually showing the gunshot wound pictures immediately adjacent to the money shot photos then everyone will start to get the idea of what really is better.
Meanwhile, at least there's poetry, and the beautiful people who compose it...
Like you!
At the core of what gets the hate train rolling is always some cash motivated cadre of stone hearted cowardly dudes who think guns are justice, in and of themselves, and clearly will never lift a legislative or fiscal finger to keep our public places and people from getting shot to pieces.
Compared to this craze the porn stars seem like saints! But sometimes the comparisons are not as blunt as they need to be to get through the thick layers of outdated and contemporary morality based law that sets so many of us up for failure.
For example, we all know that cigarettes are bad but at least they don't make heads explode into buckets of chunky blood all over the classroom, or church furnishings.
Comparison (metaphor) is everything in the grossly overlooked thought laboratory of reductio ad absurdum, which soon has its practitioners realize that both morality and legislation are a kind of triage where the public needs to get smart about who we decide to have dying first, and how...and who we vote for.
If they started actually showing the gunshot wound pictures immediately adjacent to the money shot photos then everyone will start to get the idea of what really is better.
Meanwhile, at least there's poetry, and the beautiful people who compose it...
Like you!
31st Mar 2023 5:43pm
31st Mar 2023 6:37pm
