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Climax
Thinking about you right now
I would like to see your face when you reach climax
You remind me of a boy I slept with in Barcelona
A lunatic loner
That had that moaning face, like flying
The moment he did throw the sperm inside me
But here we are
The god and his unjustices
I find you very appealing
You give me boring
Oh the irony.
I would like to see your face when you reach climax
You remind me of a boy I slept with in Barcelona
A lunatic loner
That had that moaning face, like flying
The moment he did throw the sperm inside me
But here we are
The god and his unjustices
I find you very appealing
You give me boring
Oh the irony.
Published 26th Mar 2023
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26th Mar 2023 2:29pm
There is a sparse economy to your writing that is stark, this piece in particular has presence that is engaging.
26th Mar 2023 5:06pm
Thank you dear Daniel. It is always a warm moment engaging in a conversation with you. I feel flattered and very well after reading what you have written.
26th Mar 2023 5:16pm
26th Mar 2023 2:45pm
Well. Take my wow and pin it to this write of yours.
There's no time for ice, reading your intoxicating lines.
Really good write. Really.
There's no time for ice, reading your intoxicating lines.
Really good write. Really.
26th Mar 2023 5:07pm
Thank you a lot. I will take time and read you someday because why not. There is a lot to be read here, a promise of a good time.
26th Mar 2023 5:14pm
Take your time, if at all, getting to me. Your writes are the reward today.
I was actually directed to your material. Because my friends have good taste. They were right.
I was actually directed to your material. Because my friends have good taste. They were right.
