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Morning Bliss
Straddle me and ride
Let me please you deep inside
Our moans can not hide
~*~
You’re so wet and tight
The feeling is out of sight
Good morning delight
~*~
My phallus pulsate
While you grip and gyrate
Increasing heart-rate
~*~
Sweet pleasure and pain
My body awaits your rain
You scream out my name
~*~
I keep up the heat
Hitting that yoni so sweet
Till your G-spot skeet
~*~
Your nails scratch my back
From the powerful impact
Ecstasy’s contact
~*~
Satisfied we kiss
For there’s no passion like this
We cuddled in bliss
Let me please you deep inside
Our moans can not hide
~*~
You’re so wet and tight
The feeling is out of sight
Good morning delight
~*~
My phallus pulsate
While you grip and gyrate
Increasing heart-rate
~*~
Sweet pleasure and pain
My body awaits your rain
You scream out my name
~*~
I keep up the heat
Hitting that yoni so sweet
Till your G-spot skeet
~*~
Your nails scratch my back
From the powerful impact
Ecstasy’s contact
~*~
Satisfied we kiss
For there’s no passion like this
We cuddled in bliss
Published 24th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Links of Senryu and rhymes :)
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24th Mar 2023 11:42am
Oh this is sexy! This is a poetry form I really enjoy and have some pieces written this way. I used to call them erotic linked haiku lol I wasn’t sure how to name them. You captured a perfect scene with this one!
24th Mar 2023 1:31pm
I give my thx to you Athena *hugs* I remember so well of your fantastic inks back in the day in GS... and you really inspired me to step my game up. Thank you so much for the wonderful thoughts... it means alot <3
24th Mar 2023 12:13pm
My poet, what a beautiful treat to these hazel eyes to me treated to such poetic desire before the casting rays of a New York's sunrise linguistic sweetens slowly trickling down you canvas in great taste.
Please enjoy your Friday in all you inspire to do.
Please enjoy your Friday in all you inspire to do.
24th Mar 2023 1:38pm
Aww thank you so much SweetKittyCat for your wonderful feedback on this piece *hugs* I hope all is well and a wonderful weekend dear poetress <3
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31st Mar 2023 5:18pm
Senryu sensei…
I’ve learned so much by reading your work. Thank you for the superbly sensual poems.
Love these.
I’ve learned so much by reading your work. Thank you for the superbly sensual poems.
Love these.
31st Mar 2023 7:57pm
Aww thank you Her so much for your wonderful thoughts on this piece. You're amazing with the senryu too... and I look forward for more from you. Happy Friday... I hope you have a wonderful weekend :)
Bro....your level of understanding intimacy is a national treasure
,,no scratch that....universal treasure
Much respect
Naaj
,,no scratch that....universal treasure
Much respect
Naaj
1st Apr 2023 2:52pm
Thank you my brother Naajir for your awesome thought on this piece. Since GS days and now you still the dopest poet with that pen bro. I hope you have a wonderful weekend... much respect back atcha *big dapz* :D
25th Apr 2023 9:55pm
26th Apr 2023 00:09am
Awww thank you so much Kunoichi... that feedback made my day... I appreciate you <3
