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idiot Poet
Crimson hot iron
to make it the shape
as customer want
all summer afternoon
hit down it with an old hammer
dozens of times
wiping away the hot sweat drops
turn and pour water
repeats again
until gets the shape the best form
Blacksmith:
treasuring the hammer
after putting it
in a cool place
goes rest the shade of
a tree in front of the smithy.
to make it the shape
as customer want
all summer afternoon
hit down it with an old hammer
dozens of times
wiping away the hot sweat drops
turn and pour water
repeats again
until gets the shape the best form
Blacksmith:
treasuring the hammer
after putting it
in a cool place
goes rest the shade of
a tree in front of the smithy.
Published 21st Mar 2023
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21st Mar 2023 2:08pm
They both do masterly pieces. Superb work with steel............and also deep cuts with words sometimes.
