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The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
The stark perfume of hyacinth,
catapults me back to a time
when monsters did not exist -
Or did they?
My mind burned with thoughts of him.
Although he already knew that.
This creature of darkness scans my thoughts.
Hovers upon my mind.
Thirsts for my blood, ever so, decadently rich with despair.
Magnetized by the darkness, I ached,
for this man that hunts the shadows
of my dreams.
I dreamt of the precision of porcelain
razor sharp fangs crushing holes,
openings to my soul, in my naked flesh.
His desire was insatiable to bleed me,
exquisite drop by scarlet drop.
Until I lay in his arms on the edge of life & death....
To bestow my final mortal breath.
catapults me back to a time
when monsters did not exist -
Or did they?
My mind burned with thoughts of him.
Although he already knew that.
This creature of darkness scans my thoughts.
Hovers upon my mind.
Thirsts for my blood, ever so, decadently rich with despair.
Magnetized by the darkness, I ached,
for this man that hunts the shadows
of my dreams.
I dreamt of the precision of porcelain
razor sharp fangs crushing holes,
openings to my soul, in my naked flesh.
His desire was insatiable to bleed me,
exquisite drop by scarlet drop.
Until I lay in his arms on the edge of life & death....
To bestow my final mortal breath.
Author's Note
Inspired by the poetry of Mr. Black616.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
19th Mar 2023 10:06am
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Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
20th Mar 2023 4:24am
I love the inspiration the MB instilled.... You took it and really added your own pizzazz.... I enjoyed the openness and admitted truths... almost in hushed tones... I get feeling the risk but it's that very essence that beautifully bleeds out onto the page. Keep up the good work, Debbie!
Nicely poeted
🌹🧛🏻♀️
B
Nicely poeted
🌹🧛🏻♀️
B
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Re: Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
20th Mar 2023 7:53am
Thank you so much for your encouragement. I'm learning to embrace the risks. 🦇
You made my morning.
You made my morning.
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20th Mar 2023 5:24pm
Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
21st Mar 2023 5:34pm
hello beautiful Debbie this is hauntingly poignant
death can sometimes smell sweet 💕
death can sometimes smell sweet 💕
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21st Mar 2023 5:54pm
Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
22nd Mar 2023 5:24pm
The dark seduction is magnified with his power to scan your thoughts. Creatively crafted!
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22nd Mar 2023 6:41pm
Thank you so much. I do feel like the darkness scans your thoughts. Thx for stopping bye & reading 🌻
Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
22nd Mar 2023 10:49pm
Awesome piece, delia. I love that this was inspired by another poet.
Hell yeah to these lines, wow.
"I dreamt of the precision of porcelain
razor sharp fangs crushing holes,"
LJ
Hell yeah to these lines, wow.
"I dreamt of the precision of porcelain
razor sharp fangs crushing holes,"
LJ
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Re: Re. The Darkness of Sweet Hyacinth
22nd Mar 2023 11:16pm
Thank you so much. I've always been fascinated by vampire lore. No one does the darkness better than Mr. black. Have a wonderful evening.
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26th Mar 2023 4:28pm
Wow that is so kind of you to say. I had just got a giant hyacinth plant and the fragrance is very connected to my past, a time when I was a kid, innocent to the darkness. So glad you enjoyed, makes me smile!
Have a wondrous day!
Have a wondrous day!
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