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99 minutes
99 minutes to tell 99 lies,
99 minutes gone in a blink of an eye.
99 minutes to finally decide.
99 minutes to no longer hide.
99 minutes to whisper your name.
99 minutes to swallow the shame.
99 minutes to kiss my razor goodbye.
99 minutes to make all my blood rise.
99 minutes to watch you nuzzle his neck.
99 minutes to make myself sick.
99 minutes to pour the gas out.
99 minutes to throw the match down.
99 minutes to be consumed by the flame.
99 minutes to burn off the blame.
99 minutes for one last, silent cry.
99 minutes to tell you goodbye.
To tell you goodbye...
Tell you goodbye...
You goodbye...
Goodbye...
99 minutes gone in a blink of an eye.
99 minutes to finally decide.
99 minutes to no longer hide.
99 minutes to whisper your name.
99 minutes to swallow the shame.
99 minutes to kiss my razor goodbye.
99 minutes to make all my blood rise.
99 minutes to watch you nuzzle his neck.
99 minutes to make myself sick.
99 minutes to pour the gas out.
99 minutes to throw the match down.
99 minutes to be consumed by the flame.
99 minutes to burn off the blame.
99 minutes for one last, silent cry.
99 minutes to tell you goodbye.
To tell you goodbye...
Tell you goodbye...
You goodbye...
Goodbye...
Published 10th Apr 2012
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10th Apr 2012 1:29am
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10th Apr 2012 1:40am
I WOUNDER WHAT THIS PEACE OF POETRY IS ABOUT.
Let me think now?
Could it be about, CARS or GARDENING or even
About School, and being Naughty.
I wounder.
I've Got it I think!
Just maybe its about "TIME"
NO! it couldent me..
Hay! But wait a Minure or 99 minutes I realy know what its about.
Its about "LIFE & DEATH"
Am I right?
I said am I RIGHT?
Or am I Wrong.
A VERSE ABOUT DIE'ING
.
NORMALY I HATE THIS KIND OF POEM
BUT I LIKE THIS ONE.
ITS PRETY COOL IN AN ODD SORT OF A WAY.
Take ir easy as you travel
through the years that life
has given you, and have fun
do'ing it.
TAKE CARE
The Warrior Poer
Let me think now?
Could it be about, CARS or GARDENING or even
About School, and being Naughty.
I wounder.
I've Got it I think!
Just maybe its about "TIME"
NO! it couldent me..
Hay! But wait a Minure or 99 minutes I realy know what its about.
Its about "LIFE & DEATH"
Am I right?
I said am I RIGHT?
Or am I Wrong.
A VERSE ABOUT DIE'ING
.
NORMALY I HATE THIS KIND OF POEM
BUT I LIKE THIS ONE.
ITS PRETY COOL IN AN ODD SORT OF A WAY.
Take ir easy as you travel
through the years that life
has given you, and have fun
do'ing it.
TAKE CARE
The Warrior Poer
10th Apr 2012 1:44am
You are correct,
It's of life,
And it's of death.
Thank you for your comment,
I appreciate it a bunch,
And now just take a moment,
To enjoy life and have fun. (:
- Whisper
It's of life,
And it's of death.
Thank you for your comment,
I appreciate it a bunch,
And now just take a moment,
To enjoy life and have fun. (:
- Whisper
10th Apr 2012 1:47am
~Old Souls~
When old Souls are returned to soon. Cut down before wisdom's bloom. Blossoms gathered along the way complete life's unique bouquet. By sharing flowers made into verse you may find you may heal first. Helping others find their way. Please do not go away. ~Duke Deltree~
When old Souls are returned to soon. Cut down before wisdom's bloom. Blossoms gathered along the way complete life's unique bouquet. By sharing flowers made into verse you may find you may heal first. Helping others find their way. Please do not go away. ~Duke Deltree~
10th Apr 2012 1:50am
AWWWWWWW.
Ok, I'm sorry but that was so pretty!!!! <3
/couldn't even think of a poem in response after reading.
Thanks so much! <3
Ok, I'm sorry but that was so pretty!!!! <3
/couldn't even think of a poem in response after reading.
Thanks so much! <3
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