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withdrawn
I'm drowning in a pool of thought
that seeks to silence me
self loathing in hushed tones mumbles incessantly
about things I can't change
fears beset me and anxiety builds
I'm alone with these fears
sacred day please see me afraid
I keen in watercolors
vibrantly painful
it hurts these doubts
I question my sanity
depression moves over my silent soul
I am barely aware of it it's so quiet
my anger burns
and I withdraw further
Published 8th Mar 2023
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jul 2023 7:45pm
8th Mar 2023 4:37pm
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8th Mar 2023 4:55pm
thank you graciously dearest poet my garden gives me lots of relief and the sun is gratefully coming out 💕
8th Mar 2023 5:43pm
I have known all of those feelings you have described and I agree, nature does wonders for your mood. You captured it well. 💜
8th Mar 2023 6:29pm
hello beautiful Debbie the sun is playing peek a boo with the rain clouds today I love the garden in the dappled shade thank you for the love on this 💕
8th Mar 2023 6:06pm
I’m with you on this one, beautiful lady. your poem is very moving and touched me today.
8th Mar 2023 6:30pm
hello beautiful Her good afternoon thank you for feeling me so deeply on this I cherish your thoughts 💕
Anonymous
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8th Mar 2023 9:28pm
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9th Mar 2023 00:38am
hello dearest Sight I feel for your shared bouts of depression it is the worst besides anxiety I'll take mania any day over depression thank you for sharing 💕
9th Mar 2023 2:20am
Hey sweet lady, remember… depression lies. The truth is you are strong and beautiful. The world is a better place just because you’re here.
9th Mar 2023 2:25pm
hello there beautiful Betty I thought I replied to you last night I guess it didn't go through i'm sorry you're so right about depression thank you beautiful one for understanding 💕
9th Mar 2023 12:48pm
Dear Lovely Crim
I know this well. "fears beset me and anxiety builds" Excellent expression. Bless
Mel
I know this well. "fears beset me and anxiety builds" Excellent expression. Bless
Mel
9th Mar 2023 2:26pm
17th Mar 2023 9:30pm
These episodes can be quite scary, never knowing how or when they will come about or how long they will stay.
"I keen in watercolors
vibrantly painful
it hurts these doubts
I question my sanity " it's beautifully sad.
Amazing spill.
"I keen in watercolors
vibrantly painful
it hurts these doubts
I question my sanity " it's beautifully sad.
Amazing spill.
17th Mar 2023 11:18pm
thank you graciously dearest Wally you see them occur I don't until later I deeply appreciate your caring 💕
