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Thoroughly, and with tongue
I bit into a
perfectly ripe pear
today,
and as I watched the
juice trickle down my
third finger,
to my palm
the first thing
that crossed my mind
was to describe
to you
way it
reminded me
of a
mind-blowing
kiss.
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Re. With care and a little tongue
Dear B,
See, this is the difference between a poetic mind frame and a simple mind frame. If I had bitten into the juicy pear and the sticky juice rolled down my finger and on my palm I’d have a complete melt down until I could thoroughly cleanse and sanitize my hands. Not some fabulous memory of a kiss I might have experienced (never) but cleaning my hands 🙄
Delicious write. H🌷
See, this is the difference between a poetic mind frame and a simple mind frame. If I had bitten into the juicy pear and the sticky juice rolled down my finger and on my palm I’d have a complete melt down until I could thoroughly cleanse and sanitize my hands. Not some fabulous memory of a kiss I might have experienced (never) but cleaning my hands 🙄
Delicious write. H🌷
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Re: Re. With care and a little tongue
6th Mar 2023 9:25pm
Lol… Hon, I’m a perv. Something in my palm, leaking juice down my hand… I’ve got nothing else on my mind.
But the world would burn if I went to bed with a dish in the sink. (My OCD manifests differently.)
Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
6th Mar 2023 1:30pm
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6th Mar 2023 9:26pm
Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
6th Mar 2023 9:29pm
I vote for Betty for Adult book store and novelties proprietor of the year. That you take back used sex toys unwashed is truly phenomenal....
VFB
Vote for Betty
VFB
Vote for Betty
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
7th Mar 2023 00:04am
Listen Betch, that's not a store, that's my personal collection. Over there? The smaller collection? THAT's the store.
I just use it to launder the money I get in graft as mayor.
Because I'm the mayor.
Which means, Babyboy, you work for me.
I have a strict uniform policy for my employees.
(holds up black thong)
This is your new Sheriff uniform.
I put a bell at the end of yours, so that when you swing it around it jingles.
Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
7th Mar 2023 00:17am
I look too good in my hat so yeah, you can be Mayor for awhile. It's more fun slapping cuffs on bitches and caging them for sin later ....
Your honor !
Your honor !
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
7th Mar 2023 00:23am
Don’t threaten me with a good time.
Or a bad one.
Or at all.
Get the fuck out there and squeeze the merchants for bribe money already, fuck. You keep hanging around here and I’ll make you polish the dildo display. Again
I’m starting to think you like dildo duty.
Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
6th Mar 2023 2:46pm
Great things do come in small packages! This minimalist powerhouse is sultry, succulent and to me, it's just a truly lovely, romantic admittance and everything that anyone would love to learn about the effect of their kiss has.
I do love me a perfectly ripe pear!! 🍐 *wink
Wonderfully captivating.
🌹💙
I do love me a perfectly ripe pear!! 🍐 *wink
Wonderfully captivating.
🌹💙
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
6th Mar 2023 9:27pm
Mmm. A ripe pear. I wonder what that could be a euphemism for?
Hey, thanks for the feedback. I always appreciate you, Blue.
Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
6th Mar 2023 3:35pm
wowee beautiful Betty delicious description
I can imagine what you taste like 💕
I can imagine what you taste like 💕
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6th Mar 2023 9:28pm
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
6th Mar 2023 9:30pm
Way to ruin the sexy. Dude. I was all thinking about things that are plump and ripe and would drip juice down my finger…. And you made it weird.
Nice.
Hey… thanks for stopping by
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
7th Mar 2023 00:40am
Nope. A pear looks like a… well… um… if you like the blow job thing, go you.
It’s a kiss on the lips. Either set.
If you know what you’re doing, it all works about the same…
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
7th Mar 2023 00:54am
Lol! Sweetie, my life is egg on my face. Super good for the skin! So at least we’ll be glowy!
Poetry is in the eye of the reader, and if you want me here holding a wiener and making pear innuendos… I GOT you! You are totally right… know why? The reader is always right.
I appreciate you. Thanks for reading my cryptic mouth-sex stuff. 🙂
Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
8th Mar 2023 4:26am
Elegantly sensual to the highest degree. The sensory description was out of this world wonderful. Just seeing the juice and imagining the kiss it evoked made for a heady read tonight.
John
John
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Re: Re. Thoroughly, and with tongue
8th Mar 2023 1:22pm
Thank you, I appreciate the beautiful review. The image, when it happened, was just the perfect metaphoric moment, and I’m glad you got it.